Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
3 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi Sammy i like that you have given the peacock lots of detail if you want to check out my blog
ReplyDeletethis is the link https://pvslucyh.blogspot.com/
hi samantha i am a student at parkview school and i really really love your callander art but maybe next i suggest how you made it and put a little more deatail into your writng by by by from jamie at parkview school.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI'm Tara, a year 6 student from Papakura Central School. Your art is looking great! I like how you chose a peacock, they are such beautiful animals. Maybe next time you could add on to your description. For example, you could say, 'I drew a peacock because ...' so that your audience would have a better idea.
Have a lovely day,
Tara